She has also become numb.
No speech.
Except a silent screech.
But her lips move in vain.
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Eyes looking so concentrated with pain.
Heart has become a dam overfilled with pain.
So that even her pain is in pain.
Pain has mercy on her too.
Now trying to find it’s way out.
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Pain transforming to transperant tear drops.
One by one.
Trickling down her fair cheeks.
Droplets of silent emotion.
Good flow of thoughts!
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Thank you Kartik😊
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I agree, it has a great flow.. very evocative imagry as well. Very good!
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Thank you dear bro John😊 ..I saw the suffering person in realty..what I saw …I put it in my ink.
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Reading your poem makes us feel the pain and misery of the girl. You have penned it well Kiran!
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Gratitude !! and lots of 💖 Radhika Di.
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😘😘
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Hey dear nominated you for the sunshine blogger award!
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Beautiful
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Thanks Steve😊
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I felt like you were writing everything I am feeling. Exquisite. Thank you.
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Oh really!!!…😊 …that’s a huge compliment..have a nice time
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Moving poem.. evocative piece of writing.
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Gratitude. ..humbled by your appreciating commebt
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Gratitude. ..humbled by your appreciating comment
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You’re welcome… keep writing. 🙂
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Sure 😊 have nice time ..
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